This is one of the books I hastily pulled off the shelf as the library was closing. Just a few pages in, I realized that I was NOT in the target demographic. Even remotely. I am in a woman in her mid-twenties. I think this was written quite exclusively for middle-aged men who have at least a moderate interest in football. But, I will say that the plot kept me interested just enough to press on.
For those who have not yet read The Prophet
Koryta tells the story of two brothers whose lives were shattered due to the murder of their sixteen-year-old sister, Marie. Now around 40, both men have taken an extremely different path in life. Older brother Adam, a senior and star high school football player when Marie was killed, is now a bail bondsman living with a married woman whose husband is in prison. Younger brother Kent, who was a freshman at the time of Marie's murder, is head coach of the acclaimed Chambers High School Cardinals, who both he and his brother played for. Besides coaching, Kent is also involved in prison ministry and has a wife and two young children. The two brothers have not spoken in years.
Everything they have settled into, however, is shaken by the murder of 17-year-old Rachel Bond, the girlfriend of one of Chambers' star players and a frequent babysitter of Kent's children. Both men are drawn into the case when they realise they both played an unwitting role in her murder. Driven by guilt, both due to Rachel's murder and Marie's, the brother have to reach a tentative truce--and maybe even rekindle a genuine relationship--to get to the bottom of things.
Fair enough, right? I'll admit the description I wrote sounds interesting. The problem with the novel, though...is that it's really not. Interesting, I mean. It's not interesting. I think this is partly due to the fact that (and please please I hope he never googles this book and reads this and I'm super sorry in advance, Michael Koryta, but this is how I feel) Michael Koryta is not a particularly gifted novelist. His prose falls flat. The brothers seem like caricatures. The twist is dropped out of nowhere, built from nothing, just a sinister perversion of a deus ex machina out of the sky. One of the villains, a prison-hardened stalker, speaks in such an exaggerated erudite way that Koryta may as well given him a monocle and a mustache to twirl. I half expected him to skip off to the railroad tracks and tie a damsel to them.
Listen, here's the deal. I love a well-plotted story. I love twists and turns. As much as it pains me, and it does pain me, I like thrillers. I don't want to be the type of reader who likes thrillers. But I do. However, I have standards. I want my thrillers to be beautifully written, as much a work of art with the prose as with the plot (for example, see anything written by Liz Jensen). This book did not give me beautiful writing, at all. And the plot wasn't really anything to write home about, either. So I felt that this book really didn't have much to offer me, and I'll leave it at that. Maybe it has something to offer to you.
Recommended?
Not really. But I'll say this; I admitted from go that I was NOT in this book's target audience. Maybe you are. I personally give it 2 out of 5 stars. So I do not recommend it to readers like me. I would give it a tentative recommendation to people who like James Patterson and football.
Tips
This is a library find so I'll repeat the advice I always give: check your library first! Be ready to skim or even skip several pages at at a time if football is not your thing or you are just a casual football viewer.
For those who have read The Prophet